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I’m editing the first section that is posted at www.literotica.com under the title, “Cheerleader’s Awakening.” You can find it here: https://www.literotica.com/s/cheerleaders-awakening

I’m re-reading it for clarity and continuity and I’m finding that I’m not too happy with the whole Alison gets suspended from school bit and not kicked off the cheerleading squad or the gymnastics team. instead, I’m thinking I’m going to keep her college, but she is going to get kicked off the cheerleading squad and she will never have been on the gymnastics team.
I’m thinki instead, I’m thinking I’m going to keep her college, but she is going to get kicked off the cheerleading squad and she will never have been on the gymnastics team.

I’m thinking that she shouldn’t have done gymnastics in high school or is a club activity or some other activity played into her sucess as a cheerleader. or is a club activity or some other activity played into her success as a cheerleader. I think that when we look at this this way it really fleshes out the seriousness of her fight with Brooke.

 The result is that she gets suspended for one week from the college, and kicked off the cheerleading squad. This adds a little bit more drama to her fight with Brooke. I’m currently going back through the story to make sure that everything is updated to reflect this change. 

It doesn’t have too much of an effect on the overall story, yet, as I haven’t written in the scene where Brooke comes crashing on to the field at a home football game and starts fighting with Alison on the field during her cheerleading. 

I’m not certain why Brooke, a friend of Alison’s is fighting with her. Maybe it is because she found out about Hank and Brooke is his new girlfriend? But there is a Billy connection to that person. Maybe Brooke and Billy hit it off once at a sleepover with Alison? I’m open to ideas.

If you did get a chance to read the losing virginity of ALison and Matthew, let me know what your thoughts are in the comments, or send me an email: [email protected]

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Around the Dinner Table

Current Series Status update

I’m currently working on the first installment of the Around the Dinner Table series.

Explore the sexual development of a four person household somewhere in America. Mom and Dad have no idea the depravity and experience that their college children Alison and Billy have. Get excited by the ignorance of their parents as they lovingly cuddle on the very couch Alison lost her virginity on.

Experience the story of Alison’s decent into sexual maturity through her ever more sordid sexual experiences. This series is for those people who want a detailed dynamic story told primarily through sexual experiences; no thirty pages of needless fluff to stimulate your imagination and excite your lust. This series gets right into the action and gives you world building as a part of your sexual description.

“Cheerleader’s Awakening” is the story told from Alison’s point of view. Future installments will be told from the other family members point’s of view.

At the moment, I do not have a HEA or a HFN ending planned for Alison, though that may change. What are your thoughts on Matthew? Should he return for a coup de grace?  Do you think he should save Alison from what she couldn’t find without him?

Read on, and let me know!

Download the first Chapter where Alison loses her virginity with Matthew:

ePub file of Cheerleader’s Awakening Chapter 1, Around the Dinner Table Part 1

Plain Text version of Cheerleader’s Awakening Chapter 1, Around the Dinner Table Part 1