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One more day

There is only one day left! Oh noes!

Get your free copy of the book, “Take Her” from Hill’s Secrets volume 01.

Alison, if you’ve read any of the books so far, or seen my work at www.literotica.com or signed up to my mailing list, is an 18 year old cheerleader who has just discovered sex, and quickly plunges into the deep dark end of sexual experiences at school (college).

My goal for Alison is to torture her and see what happens. I want her to flow through a progressively worse series of experiences and see how she handles the tribulations of the men she encounters.

When reading “Take Her,” pay particular attention to how the men she chooses to interact with all take from her more than she offers. She has this image of how she wants reality to behave for her, and the men she gets with have different ideas. Her ingrained character flaw is that she constantly overestimates her own power, and then capitulates when men take more from her than she intends.

Explore with me, and with Alison, how she handles more than she expects, and more than she can bear.

 

“Take Her,” aside, I’m currently working on the 2016 Thanksgiving special, and am a little stuck on the age play between Alison and family friend Frank. Personally, I’ve never been with someone considerably older than me, and have difficulty shoehorning a believable experience in. I want Alison to be infatuated with Frank’s maturity, and old man sexiness (40’s). I want the 20 year age difference to highlight how experienced and confident he is during their sex and how confused and pliable Alison is.

We’ll look at similar experiences for Billy and Sarah, who will have their own tryst while Alison and Sarah’s husband Frank consummate their dalliance. I’m struggling with similar qualities: how to make the seduction believable and realistic without being ridiculous.  I want Billy and Sarah to be more of a hungry cougar pouncing on a youthful Billy, whereas Frank reluctantly succumbs to his desire.

At the moment I’m debating whether Jess and Will (Mom and Dad Hill) should have another couple sex story, or if they should have their own masturbation scenes. I’m assuming sex, as the market (as best I can tell from reading in it) does not have a lot of personal masturbation scenes.

What do you think? Let me know in the comments below.

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Slutty Halloween, come and gone

When you start writing erotica, you read articles that tell you how to spell the word “cum” correctly.

You see, it is important that you get the vernacular correct when you’re writing in your genre. Readers expect you to to talk in their language, and when you’re cumming all over the place, and when you cum, you have to write it correctly. But when you “came” on the sheets,  because the prose was so good, you have to know the correct way to spell it.

I say that because I almost wrote, “Slutty Halloween, cum and gone” because I’m so used to writing it correctly for the books. With that out of the way,

Happy Halloween!

I hope that you had a great evening, or weekend full of slutty and scantily clad parties where the men were bare chested, muscled, firm but kind, and the women were lithe sexy and dressed to slut themselves out.

Halloween is the best because you can wear t-shirts as dresses, and it’s okay, because you’re a farmer’s wife, a slutty farmer’s wife. You can do that, and no one cares.

When I was writing, “Lust” the word occurs a lot. Guys cum, and girls cum, and hopefully they cum all over each other in waves of cumming pleasure. You can see here: http://amzn.to/2f3NWNN

What I’d like you to take away from this is that language is specific to the audience and the writer (me) takes account of it in order to get the message across. I want you to experience a heady rush of satisfaction from the words I choose to write down and deliver. I want you to have a cerebral thoughtful savoriness when you read about Alison getting fucked on a table by a vampire whose bite drives women wild. I want you to swell with joy when Billy drives his stick in a ghost in the middle of a park, and feel the fright with each thrust that at any moment a car can come into the parking lot and shine headlights onto his naked ass.

Knowing how to say “cum” instead of “come” is an important step in keeping you engaged in the story, and not confused by syntax and connotation.

Happy slutty Halloween!

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Not yet Halloween, and already working on Thanksgiving

That’s right! I started today on the Hill’s Secrets 2016 Holiday special for Thanksgiving! I’m going with the older partner age play angel, and Alison and Billy will share a family friend couple’s attention: Frank and Sarah, college friends of parents Will and Jess are in town for business, and instead of going to a restaurant for dinner, stop by the Hill family to sample their fare.

Alison and older man, Frank, hook up in the basement while older woman Sarah seduces Billy in the bathroom.

The interplay between young and old will be the focus, but Will and Jess each have their own story this Thanksgiving to truly reflect on what they appreciate in their lives.

I’m looking at making Frank and Alison a little dirty, like he really highlights his experience and kinkiness, that she still isn’t used to in men. Alison is still somewhat virginal at this point, and I like using the lenses of her inexperience to show in relief how depraved we become over time: age changes us all, and what once excited and made us cum, now is simply another dick swinging between someone’s legs, or another firm six-pack. We soon require more intense stimulation to push us over the edge of complacency and what becomes normal.

What would you like to see Will (Dad) or Jess (Mom) do during Thanksgiving. I want them to have their own stories, but it could or could not involve them being with each other. Remember, Will and Jess are in a monogamous relationship that does not stray. They are a constant source of wholesome values (with kinky sex) throughout this story.

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Take Her, free for 5 days, starting tomorrow

If you haven’t picked up the 2016 Halloween Special of Hill’s Secrets, do it now, today is your last chance for it to be free: http://amzn.to/2foilqw After today, it will be $0.99 on the Amazon Kindle store, or free if you do Kindle Unlimited.

You can get a free 30 day membership to KU here if you want: Join Amazon Kindle Unlimited 30-Day Free Trial

Even more important, is that tomorrow, you can get book 1 of the Hill’s Secrets series “Take Her” for free from Amazon. http://amzn.to/2e5GYqr This is available for a limited of time after Halloween, so take advantage of it now!

“Take Her” is Alison’s first semester of freshman year in college. We see her high school relationship crumble through a series of casual sexual encounters with her long time boyfriend Matthew. Ultimately, they destroy their relationship through their own ignorance, and immaturity.  Empowered by her awakened sexuality, but confused at the violent and aggressive nature of men, Alison quickly learns that what she offers is not always exactly what the men she chooses want. Instead, they take her beyond her offering and push her to the limit of her sexual comfort.

I think that a good story draws you in through slowly revealed plot. I read erotica to get off, and I hate slogging through hours and hours of tension building to get to the good stuff.

“Take Her” has a story, it has a plot, it has all the trappings of a romance, not a happy one, but there is love and lust there. The story is just told through sex. Scenes are sexual and through the relationship of the actors, we get the emotional force to drive the story forward.

Are you ready to dive into a sinful series of sexual escapades to discover the true thoughts of Alison and the men she chooses to be with?

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Vol 01 of Hill’s Secrets series is live!

Take Her, available now!

Live now on Amazon! You can buy it today, or borrow it for free through Kindle Unlimited!

Get a free KU subscripiton for 30 days here, and you can enjoy all the sexy erotic stories I’ve published 🙂

Check out my Amazon author page here: http://amzn.to/2e82Xw8

Today I released the first full novel for the Hill Family and their sexual secrets. This is Alison’s tale, a college freshman cheerleader who has just lost her virginity with Matthew. Take her voyage through the summer after high school graduation, and into her fall semester at college.

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Alison Hill has blond hair, a tight athletic body,  and is constantly misinterpreting her sexual intentions. Her lovers read her flirting and confidence as an open invitation to take her any way they please. Confused, and reluctant, she lets them take her body how they want, and how they need to satisfy their desires. Will she stand up to their use? Will she take control of her own sex life? Find out inside as she falls down the rabbit hole.

 

College freshman Alison Hill tumbles from school sweetheart Matthew, to football star Hank, and tutor nerd Eugene. Explore the depths of her depraved cheer-leading exploits on and off campus.

The Hill family has plenty of secrets from each other, and the first installment looks at Alison’s story. Follow her, as she recounts her personal coming of age through the lens of her intimate experiences. She’ll take you through the uncertain moments of her first family home couch explorations, her degrading rebound quickies, and her surprising yoga master affair. Beware though, Alison’s journey takes her to the dregs of campus life. Will she come through stronger? Or will she be taken by their desires? Find out in the full length novella, “Take Her.”

WARNING: This story contains mature themes and language, sexual scenes with graphic description. Intended for 18+ readers only. Focuses on the steam.

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“Lust” Hill’s Secret’s Vol 101 Halloween Special 2016 Live

The first published book is LIVE on Amazon! What a great wonderful day to begin a writing career online.

As I mentioned earlier, the first full length story for a singular family member is coming soon. I’m just waiting for the edit to be finished. We’ll take a look at Alison’s story and explore her first year as a college freshman.

“Lust” looks at Alison and Brooke, going to an outrageous, over the top, amazing Halloween party on campus. They’ve done their research for the most authentic, and well thrown party. No more shitty frat parties for them.

Billy, Alison’s older sister plays video games, and he has a rule where he has to run a mile a day for every hour he plays of games. Strange rule, but necessary if he ever wants to get with Alison’s hot friend Brooke. While on a midnight run on Halloween, Billy meets up with a spectral lady friend.

Finally, Mom and Dad, or Will and Jessica, find some time away from the kids and go to a Halloween party thrown by their real estate developer friend. They friend, Robert, has a theme each year; one scarier and more morose than the last. This year, they’re partying in a true haunted house. But Will and Jess have a secret; they fuck at every Halloween party, it has kinda, ‘become their thing.” Last year they screwed on an old casket, this year…

See them have sex, see them frightened, and feel their pain and excitement, in Lust!

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Halloween Here we Come

Cum? The Halloween special for 2016 is up on Kindle and should be published soon! This is the first published work, and the upcoming Vol 01, “Take Her” will be published soon. It is off to the editor for proofing, but finished! Whew!

So you’re aware, and if you’re interested in starting to write books, I started the Hill family stories in the end of August, and now, a full month and a half later, I have two finished books over 20k words each.  It isn’t too difficult with erotica, because each scene is about the sex, or it is in my books. So far, I want to focus more on the actual ‘getting it on’ action versus the long drawn out tension building of most romance books.

Now, I just pulled up my statistics and the Halloween special is at 29k words, almost at 30k (100 shy :() And the book, “Hill’s Secrets: Vol 01 “Take Her” Alison’s story” is at 51k words.

So that is about 80k words in less than a month, and I haven’t even been writing full time every day. It is entirely possible to pump out a compelling story and an interesting world in a short amount of time.

I would say I spent much of my time re-editing, reviewing, and planning, and the other half sitting down to write for a few hours every week. Yes, there were some days where I wrote more than others, and they tended to be the best days of writing where I had the best prose, but there were other short stints that had just as good material.

I’ve read a number of books on how to write well, and quickly, and it starts with knowing what you are going to write before you sit down and start doing it.

When I planned out the Halloween special, I knew that I wanted Alison to hook up with 3 vampires. I didn’t know exactly what they wanted with her, or how they would each be unique, but those details filled themselves in when I set the setting and their general demeanor first.

I’m a little troubled by the third vampire and his homosexuality. I think it is a bit demeaning to gay men to suggest that they need to fuck a girl in the ass just because they’re gay and that is the only way they can get off being with a girl.  I don’t really believe that. I included it, because, well, anal sex is risque, it is taboo, and the idea of a gay vampire anally fucking a girl is kinda funny. It plays on the common zeitgeist of how we think about gay men: anal sex. That is all changing, and good, and I’m sure that I can help turn that thought around with better writing, but I didn’t do it here.

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Here is the cover art for the Halloween Special 2016. There are 3 sexual stories for Alison, 1 story for Billy, and 1 story for Will and Jess (Dad and Mom). Each member of the family will have a standalone book about 50k words, that details their sexual lives. I intend on writing in this order: Alison, Billy, Will, Jess. Right now “Take Her,” Alison’s story is finished and going through editing, and I’m writing Billy’s story, tentatively named, “Abusing the Game.”

Next up in the holiday series will be a short series for the Hill family and Thanksgiving. I’m thinking about Alison having a solo scene where she masturbates to a sexy uncle, but without any additional help (no incest). Billy will have an older woman rendezvous just before the ‘big meal,’ and Will and Jess (my happy married couple) will release some Thanksgiving stress either before or after the extended families show up. I haven’t decided yet. Opinions?

 

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Hill’s Secrets Halloween Special

Halloween is always one of my most favorite times of year. I love the transition from summer to fall. The colors, the cool air, the leaves rustling on the ground in the angry wind. It is awesome. Fall always held such great memories for me; from school starting, to the weather, the transition to warm clothes. Just everything. I’m a creature of fall.

One of my most fond memories is laying in bed at night with the window slightly open as I listed to the wind carry dead leaves down the street. It was spooky, it was comforting, and I always felt like with harvest, and the beginning of winter, death and the underworld were right there pressing up against our own world. With everything dying, it was like a siren song for spirits and monsters to blend closer into our reality.

And with that in mind, I’m putting together a Halloween Special involving all four members of the Hill family to release in advance of the new book, “Take Me.” Kicking off the Hill’s secrets series will be Alison’s tale. Her theme is all about being taken by the guys she throws her herself at in startling and unexpected ways. You can assume that all her men misinterpret her signals.

In the Halloween special Alison hooks up with three vampires at a house party, Billy has a short intense visit from a specter, and Mom and Dad enjoy a very risky romp at a friend’s party.

Alison’s story dominates the book, but she is so far my most fleshed out character, as her book is finished and in the editing process.

I’m toying with the idea of giving Brooke her own story, or integrating it into Billy’s. What do you think of black haired, big tittied girls with olive skin hooking up with nerdy older brothers? Alison is the typical blonde haired sexy cheerleader. Brooke is more the bad girl version of the suburban cheerleader sexy pot.

Does Billy stand a chance of fulfilling his desires?

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Pick the Cover art for Alison’s Story

Here are two different polls to vote on your choice of cover for Alison’s story, currently titled, “Cheerleader’s Awakening.” I’ve changed the title for the pending full novella (50k words) that will be up on amazon, and Kindle Unlimited soon. Join Amazon Kindle Unlimited 30-Day Free Trial

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You’ll notice too, I’ve named the family the Hill Family, and the series is now, “Hill’s Secrets.” Alison’s story is volume 1, Billy’s will be 2, Dad’s will be 3, and Mom’s 4.

 

Remember to sign up for the mailing list at the right to get more information and a free chapter before the release. I’ll be asking for beta readers and giving away full free digital copies on that list too.

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Who is Alison, the titular character?

In writing the story, “Cheerleader’s Awakening,” which is a working title right now, I’m focusing first on Alison. Alison is the cheerleader in college.  We get a good look at her sexual activity from start to …. wherever it goes.

You can say that Alison is based off of a typical suburban girl who grew up in the 90’s. Obviously, she’s been adapted to fit today’s standards of stuff like smartphones and ubiquitous internet. There were days not so long ago that the internet was a luxury, and nothing personal was on there.

Alison is fundamentally flawed because she believes in the power of her own will too much. We see her fail over and over at gauging situations and believing that she is in control, losing that control, and then re-writing history to suit her version of it.

Granted, this is mostly a defensive mechanism. The reader is experiencing her story through her words. She is the narrator in the story, or in book 1 of Around the Dinner Table.  It is through her voice that we experience the growth of her sexuality.

I made a decision immediately to attempt to tell her story with as much sex as possible. I wanted the circumstances of the story to come through as a part of the sex. Matthew and Alison’s sex life after their initial virginity losing experience gives a description of their failing relationship. It should be apparent the resentment Alison has for him, especially at the frat house. This is decent foreshadowing too, as she hits her lowest point at a frat house in chapter 05. I thought that low point was Matthew, stoned, having sex with Alison on a futon in a dirty filthy tiny frat room, with a used condom waiting underneath her the whole time.

We see Alison believe that she is going to do something simple, something small, and her partners misinterpret her signals for something more. This is a common experience for women every day. We can go through life existing in a totally benign and innocent way, but the men around us can read into our skirts, our blouses, and our bra straps a “desire to want them.” They’ll say things like, “You knew I wanted it. Otherwise, you wouldn’t have worn that dress.” Like I have to want to do some moron just because I happened to wear a dress I thought I looked good in out in public? Alison experiences this repeatedly through her attempts at sexual interaction, usually fairly tame: blowjob, make-out, kissing, grinding, finger play. The men she is with, push. They push farther than she would ever had imagined before the act.

Yet, Alison never says, “NO.” Directly. She believes she has this power to be in control and command of her life, but when she’s met with a domineering male or female she captitulates and lets them take over. She endures. She moves from this active go-getter to a passive receiver of whatever depraved and sorid acts they want to do to her.

The goal, of course, is to get us to cheer for her. to encourage her to stand up to there ridiculous abusive men. We want her to fight back and take the reigns. And we do see that. We see her break up with Matthew when his disregard gets too much. We see her take charge of Hank, and we see her teach and take command of Gene. There are moments in every experience she has, that highlights her potential dominat sexuality, if she chooses to excersize it.

Too often, the trope of female sexuality is being used by the men. That has it’s place here and Alison is used as a hole on numerous occasions. She needs to have that dehumanization so she can overcome it. The struggle of her experience is interesting, and ultimately, what we want to read about.

In an ideal, bed cover reading, happy home, no woman would endure the abuse and degradation Alison receives in order to achieve her self respect and sexual confidence. I’d love for all women to be in control of their own lives and their own sexual experiences in the fashion they wish: without the extraneous pressures of male dominance hovering over every action. When you don’t live in fear of being beaten to death by the person you’re sleeping next to, you have inherent power. Like white privalage, men (many) don’t fully understand what it is to be sexually involved with a person who can force you to do what they want at any moment. Any power women really have is after the fact, or in response to. Rarely is it physically dominat and even less often, do women have social or financial control over the man.

So where does that leave us with Alison. She is confident, smart, and powerful. She has a spirit of hard work proven through her studies, college success (scholastically) and position on the college cheerleading squad. The implication given that she has worked hard to achieve her goals. She is competent in dance, gymnastics, goes to the gym regularly, eats well, and has a happy relationship with her parents. Her first sexual experience is with her high school boyfriend, and it is a loving gentle experience. She wasn’t abused or raped as a child.

She doesn’t turn to sex to fill a void, but to explore the excitement and pleasure of it. Alison enjoys sex, and as seen in the first car scene with Matthew, she takes control of the situation to reach satisfaction, although still feels a little guilty about it. She isn’t soulless.

Finally, much of this is to set in juxtaposition her relationship with her family at the dinner table. We get the impression at dinner of a naive innocent girl who loves her “daddy.” One of the visions for this book was setting that scene and immediately following it with Alison having a dick in her mouth, or a cock up her  butt. That jarring disconnect is interesting, and you can be a sexual dynamo but still be “daddy’s little girl.” You can be that princess and jewel of his eye that will never do anything wrong. And you can also be a sexually powerful woman who enjoys anal, enjoys the power and excitement of a blowjob, and who has active orgasmic sex with men. Those are not mutually exclusive people, and Alison straddles both. She just isn’t in control yet.

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Writing Around the Dinner Table

I’m editing the first section that is posted at www.literotica.com under the title, “Cheerleader’s Awakening.” You can find it here: https://www.literotica.com/s/cheerleaders-awakening

I’m re-reading it for clarity and continuity and I’m finding that I’m not too happy with the whole Alison gets suspended from school bit and not kicked off the cheerleading squad or the gymnastics team. instead, I’m thinking I’m going to keep her college, but she is going to get kicked off the cheerleading squad and she will never have been on the gymnastics team.
I’m thinki instead, I’m thinking I’m going to keep her college, but she is going to get kicked off the cheerleading squad and she will never have been on the gymnastics team.

I’m thinking that she shouldn’t have done gymnastics in high school or is a club activity or some other activity played into her sucess as a cheerleader. or is a club activity or some other activity played into her success as a cheerleader. I think that when we look at this this way it really fleshes out the seriousness of her fight with Brooke.

 The result is that she gets suspended for one week from the college, and kicked off the cheerleading squad. This adds a little bit more drama to her fight with Brooke. I’m currently going back through the story to make sure that everything is updated to reflect this change. 

It doesn’t have too much of an effect on the overall story, yet, as I haven’t written in the scene where Brooke comes crashing on to the field at a home football game and starts fighting with Alison on the field during her cheerleading. 

I’m not certain why Brooke, a friend of Alison’s is fighting with her. Maybe it is because she found out about Hank and Brooke is his new girlfriend? But there is a Billy connection to that person. Maybe Brooke and Billy hit it off once at a sleepover with Alison? I’m open to ideas.

If you did get a chance to read the losing virginity of ALison and Matthew, let me know what your thoughts are in the comments, or send me an email: [email protected]

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Current Series Status update

I’m currently working on the first installment of the Around the Dinner Table series.

Explore the sexual development of a four person household somewhere in America. Mom and Dad have no idea the depravity and experience that their college children Alison and Billy have. Get excited by the ignorance of their parents as they lovingly cuddle on the very couch Alison lost her virginity on.

Experience the story of Alison’s decent into sexual maturity through her ever more sordid sexual experiences. This series is for those people who want a detailed dynamic story told primarily through sexual experiences; no thirty pages of needless fluff to stimulate your imagination and excite your lust. This series gets right into the action and gives you world building as a part of your sexual description.

“Cheerleader’s Awakening” is the story told from Alison’s point of view. Future installments will be told from the other family members point’s of view.

At the moment, I do not have a HEA or a HFN ending planned for Alison, though that may change. What are your thoughts on Matthew? Should he return for a coup de grace?  Do you think he should save Alison from what she couldn’t find without him?

Read on, and let me know!

Download the first Chapter where Alison loses her virginity with Matthew:

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