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Around the Dinner Table

Writing Around the Dinner Table

I’m editing the first section that is posted at www.literotica.com under the title, “Cheerleader’s Awakening.” You can find it here: https://www.literotica.com/s/cheerleaders-awakening

I’m re-reading it for clarity and continuity and I’m finding that I’m not too happy with the whole Alison gets suspended from school bit and not kicked off the cheerleading squad or the gymnastics team. instead, I’m thinking I’m going to keep her college, but she is going to get kicked off the cheerleading squad and she will never have been on the gymnastics team.
I’m thinki instead, I’m thinking I’m going to keep her college, but she is going to get kicked off the cheerleading squad and she will never have been on the gymnastics team.

I’m thinking that she shouldn’t have done gymnastics in high school or is a club activity or some other activity played into her sucess as a cheerleader. or is a club activity or some other activity played into her success as a cheerleader. I think that when we look at this this way it really fleshes out the seriousness of her fight with Brooke.

 The result is that she gets suspended for one week from the college, and kicked off the cheerleading squad. This adds a little bit more drama to her fight with Brooke. I’m currently going back through the story to make sure that everything is updated to reflect this change. 

It doesn’t have too much of an effect on the overall story, yet, as I haven’t written in the scene where Brooke comes crashing on to the field at a home football game and starts fighting with Alison on the field during her cheerleading. 

I’m not certain why Brooke, a friend of Alison’s is fighting with her. Maybe it is because she found out about Hank and Brooke is his new girlfriend? But there is a Billy connection to that person. Maybe Brooke and Billy hit it off once at a sleepover with Alison? I’m open to ideas.

If you did get a chance to read the losing virginity of ALison and Matthew, let me know what your thoughts are in the comments, or send me an email: [email protected]